Hi Scott
I'll leave the analysis to the experts, but I really like this one.
After my first listen I immediately cued it up again.
Regards,
Leon
Thanks, Leon. I'm not good at analysis either, just listening.
Good song! Love your vocal.
"She says she loves me
But she doesn’t want me to dance"
Nice hook!
Track sounds good also, enjoyed the listen.
I appreciate the comments, Dave.
Crawlin’...fallin’...loves how you “wobbled” those in the melody.
Really interesting selection of guitar RTs..gave it great texture.
Liked the stops you used.
Vocals++
Your wife has got to share the royalties on this one!
Royalties, huh? I can only wish for those.
The spoken tag was worth the price of admission

We could envision the Lewis ambulations.
The band is a cool RT genre mashup and well backed your rousing well delivered vocal.
(Janice provided "rousing!")
Nice use of the drum loops also.
Fun!
J&B
Thanks, J&B. I had a lot of fun making this one and ad libbing at the end.