I think this is really good.

I didn't like that distorted guitar part, I think you could drop that. I also thought it was too long. It sounded a little repetitious. If you want it this long I would bring a full orchestra with percussion and choir. Note this is just my opinion so take it for what its worth.

BUT I thought most of this was excellent. Super flute and call and response sections. The mix was excellent. Nice use of RTs and MIDI.

It sounds like you were classically trained. Were you?

Whenever I get something stuck in the back of my throat, I dislodge it by drinking a beer.
It's called the Heineken Maneuver.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware