Here is the first draft of my newest BIAB/RB song. It is an original and everything was done with BIAB and RB. It is about barrel racing, a rodeo event for women.

As usual, everything is up for critique - Lyrics, Vocals, Production, Mastering, etc. This is one of the songs I plan to pitch to publishers, producers and my rep at ASCAP to hopefully get something going for me as an artist. Anything you can point out that would help me would be wonderful. Obviously it isn't pro level, but I want it to be close enough so that folks can hear the potential. It definitely think it could benefit from fills in the verses but that is beyond my expertise.

Thanks again for everyone's help.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8786004


Ricky

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