Hey David… Definitely a lot of energy in the performance. If I could offer you some feedback, it would be this… Insert some instrumental content somewhere in the middle of this. The components you have are good but they tend to sound overly repeated, and I think that if you offset it with 8 to 16 bars of instrumental stuff, then came back strong with your repeated message, it would really improve the overall listening impact. Great work!


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