Originally Posted By: jannesan
Good imagery, yes, corona time seems to give inspiration for many songs, so it is not a bad thing after all smile Sometimes it feels being in a jail or nightmare, but on the other hand, so does whole life once in a while laugh

Very nice jumpy breaks in the rhythm, giving the song claustrophobic feel - just like being stuck.

I like this type of songs where the chords are mainly major in the verses and then some minor chords in the chorus, maybe the melancholy talks to me. The chorus is very good and catchy. Good rocking band and the fiddle fits nicely to the rhythm. Very good confident singing, you are getting better all the time.

Janne


Hi Janne, thanks so much for your kind words, although... claustrophobic... I think stuck is good enough.
No I'm kidding a bit. It was my plan to make a song abouth a dream I coudln't get out. A kind of nightmare you are aware of, but still cannot wake. But I got some problems on the lyrics with that and the made the connection with that virus and how we are forced to live now.
And your last sentence is making me feeling very proud.

Thanks for that,
Hans

Originally Posted By: Ezekiel's Storm
I love the band you made. The opening bars really hooked me.
I particularly like this line: "Can I wake-up or pay me a bail?" Good!


Hi Ezekiel, nice way of telling me you liked the song! And it's funny you quoted that line. The moment it came in my head, while writing the lyrics I liked it too. And when singing it even more. I could almost see me bargaining about it.

So thanks a lot,
Hans

Hans Berkhout
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