Well Powderman,

I'm glad you fished it out of the NOT-SO-GOOD bin, because it's a catchy little tune. I agree with others about the vocals being too far back. You have a good voice and it should be right up front.

Regarding song structure, I kept expecting a break of some kind, but it never came... The part where the harmony kicked in was very similar to the rest of the song, and my ears wanted to hear a changeup.

And my usual observation about songs is that the decoration (in this case, the harmonica) may add more of an accent if it appears sparingly as opposed to playing throughout the whole song. But those are very small things, and they speak more about what I like than it does about the quality of the song.

You have a very gentle singing style for a big ol' bear of a man, and you do a good job of matching the song to your voice. All in all it is a very enjoyable tune to listen to. Are you a performer, or do you write songs for your own enjoyment? I can imagine audiences really enjoying what you bring to the table.