Thanks to everyone for such great comments! Especially Floyd, that kind of review from someone with your expertise has certainly bolstered my confidence. And Tangmo, you were reading my mind as regards writing the song! David Cuny, you could be right, I am not the best at writing chord progressions, and I am going to consult with some who would know better than me to see if I have made some mistakes. (Jeez, I sure hope not, I will be crestfallen.)

It's still weird to me that I am writing pop songs when all I ever used to do was play the blues. But after forty years of 1-IV-V, I guess I got a little bored.

Thanks again all, this was the best response I've gotten yet!


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