Hey P-Man. I like this. It's easy on the ears. Has a good story line to it. The harmony is nice too. I agree you need to bring your voice out some more along with the harmonies. They're too far back in the mix. I think it needs some guitar riffs or steel working in the background too. Last of all, fix the ending. It stopped too abruptly. Other than that it's great work. Good on ya Mate. Keep up the good work.

BTW this song is in the potentially great position in my book.


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