Hi Misha,

Thanks for your 'explanation'!
And yes in this revised version your vocal were/are much brighter (and louder).
I could even understand the quickly spoken lines better now, although I doubt if that was why you sang it again.

But I am glad this was the only few things you changed, because the song is good. It has a very catchy rhythm, and the many things that happen in the song are so nicely done. I am very curious what will come next...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130