I listen to this a dozen times or so. There is nothing wrong with his vocal. Like it, don't like it, that is all subjective.

There are some technical issues with his singing but this was never intended to be some highly polished technically correct production.

It was to be played live with who ever the vocalist in the band happened to be at any given time.

As I have gone back and listened to this I think I want to simplify the song and take the piano out. Drums, bass, two guitars, organ, and the vocal.

The really good thing about BIAB is I now have a much better idea if I like the song well enough to spend the time and money to get it recorded just how I want it.

I don't have the skills to play the lead guitar the way I hear it in my head.

As far as getting a vocalist from fiverr, so far there have been no surprises.

Cheers,

Billy

“Amazing! I’ll be working with Jaco Pastorius, Charlie Parker, Art Tatum, and Buddy Rich, and you’re telling me it’s not that great of a gig?
“Well…” Saint Peter, hesitated, “God’s got this girlfriend who thinks she can sing…”