Hi James,

I'm getting more and more impressed by the creative angle you choose to make your songs!
In this particular song it is a poem of Shakespeare that is the key for the song. Very original!
And I am getting more used to the way you 'sing' in it. This is becomming your personal style. I would recognize it immediately if I heard it unannounced! Not everyone can say that when their (my) songs are played, I bet.

But, I have told you that before and Floyd and others did here too, the words come out too slow. There is a danger that people will lose their attention. Is more intonation possible? Like when reciting poems?
All together I think you did a very good and original job!

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130