musiclover,
A really nice song. A sweet story, well told.
Your vocal is quite nice - perfect for the story. The backing, too.
I assume you are playing accordion? Sounds good.
You list the BIAB details as (mostly) MIDI. If you are using a vst for the acoustic guitar - it is a good one - sounds good...
I enjoyed the listen. You should post more often! After all we're "never too old to share".

fj