Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Leon & Peter,

A nice message, good write.

I like the simple opening leading to the full build.
Good BAND. Good drums/percussion. Nice guitar fills and leads.

Well sung. (the vocal cold come down slightly).

The lyric really sticks with you following the repeats at the end.

Well done.

fj


Thanks floyd, appreciate the review and suggestions.

Peter

Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Nice tune and good playing. I liked the rhyming of violent and silent, nice contrast.


Appreciate that.

Peter