I like the instrumentation and musical setting for your song. I think your lyrics captured the scene nicely. The stops you created, and the arpeggios that follow--these are very effective for interest-keeping, esp in a slow-tempo song. My only recommendation would be to shorten the song--I think that slower-tempo works like this run the risk of losing listeners--better to keep it shorter and make your statement, then get out! Nicely produced overall!


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