Musician17,

This is really nicely done. It’s a fine write and the spoken word vocal is delivered very well—just the right pacing. And the twist is slick . . . pulls the listener in when it hits. For me, in the mix, there’s a high chiming bell sound that pops up, not quite sure what it is . . . in spots it’s perfect and in others for me a little distracting. Not sure if there’s a way for you to manage that. But that’s a small nit and may be just me. Good work on this!

All my best,

Deej