I think I'd like to hear this with the 3rd as the main vocal...it's tone & freq suit the style.
The guitar solo is nice but it doesn't really match the style.'The general feel is a bit 68-71 music hall influences psych - something a Pink Floyd or Beatle would've done to be a little spooky.


Cheers
rayc
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