SongCrafters,

A good song, well put together. I tend to agree a bit with rayc on the vocal, recognizing as well that it’s a stylistic preference. I just find it makes it a bit difficult to follow your lyric in certain spots, which takes something away for me. Then again, I love early R.E.M., and who knows what the heck they were singing about! So sound can sometimes carry the day, and this one has a nice sound and feel to it. Nice work on the video.

Kind regards,

Deej