Hello fellow artists!
Once more - and for the final time for now (else you will get fed up with me :-) ) - I am asking you to review my third song with BIAB "Queen of Hearts" on
Soundcloud Let me know what's good and what you would have done differently.
Queen of Hearts – Tina Jay
IntroVerse 1When – you try – to shut me out I hide Don’t you see me cry
When – you try – to push me down I flinch You don’t notice why
Verse 2When – you try – to limit me I shrink Wondering where to turn
When – you try – to dominate I think Let our bridges burn
Verse 3When – I hear – another of your lies It just makes me smile
Don’t – you see – I’m a wonder in disguise You just wait a while….
ChorusI – am – the Queen of Hearts I – play – the major part
I – am – the one that rocks I’m not – afraid to shock
Watch – Me – Leave….
Instrumental (one verse length)
Chorus x2I – am – the Queen of Hearts I – play – the major part
I – am – the one that rocks I’m not – afraid to shock
I – am – the one who’s strong I’m not – where I belong
OutroWatch – Me – Leave – You – NOW….
I am still on the BIAB Pro Version and have used Audacity and Ozone 9 in addition on this rock track. Again, no tuning vocals (don't believe in it) and MIDI (will tackle next...).
RealTracks in style: 1189:Bass, Electric, HardRockWaltz Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 860:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockWaltzSustainA-B Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 857:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockWaltzMutedA-B Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 854:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Rhythm RockWaltzA-B Ev 140
RealDrums [in Song:RockModernWaltz^5-a:Snare, Ride , b:Snare, Crash Ride
I have also incorporated 2 harmonies (high/low) in the chorus; and vocal aahs in the Instrumental (Male/Female).
Thank you!!
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