Hello fellow artists!

Once more - and for the final time for now (else you will get fed up with me :-) ) - I am asking you to review my third song with BIAB "Queen of Hearts" on Soundcloud

Let me know what's good and what you would have done differently.

Queen of Hearts – Tina Jay

Intro
Verse 1
When – you try – to shut me out I hide Don’t you see me cry
When – you try – to push me down I flinch You don’t notice why
Verse 2
When – you try – to limit me I shrink Wondering where to turn
When – you try – to dominate I think Let our bridges burn
Verse 3
When – I hear – another of your lies It just makes me smile
Don’t – you see – I’m a wonder in disguise You just wait a while….
Chorus
I – am – the Queen of Hearts I – play – the major part
I – am – the one that rocks I’m not – afraid to shock
Watch – Me – Leave….
Instrumental (one verse length)
Chorus x2
I – am – the Queen of Hearts I – play – the major part
I – am – the one that rocks I’m not – afraid to shock
I – am – the one who’s strong I’m not – where I belong
Outro
Watch – Me – Leave – You – NOW….


I am still on the BIAB Pro Version and have used Audacity and Ozone 9 in addition on this rock track. Again, no tuning vocals (don't believe in it) and MIDI (will tackle next...).

RealTracks in style: 1189:Bass, Electric, HardRockWaltz Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 860:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockWaltzSustainA-B Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 857:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm HardRockWaltzMutedA-B Ev 140
RealTracks in style: 854:Guitar, 12-String Acoustic, Rhythm RockWaltzA-B Ev 140
RealDrums [in Song:RockModernWaltz^5-a:Snare, Ride , b:Snare, Crash Ride

I have also incorporated 2 harmonies (high/low) in the chorus; and vocal aahs in the Instrumental (Male/Female).

Thank you!!