Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
hey Peter,
what I like:
- The chord progression
- the way it escalates from a fairly minimal production at the start to a full-blown multi-layered sound fiesta
- the fact that you played some of the tracks yourself
- the twin guitar solos... probably my favorite part of the song, both in terms of content and mood
- the fact that your solo contains a recurring motif...
__which after all these years is still the thing I find missing in so many songs posted to the user showcase.
- lyrics

I never had a woman leave me, but as a widower I identify with the phrase
Quote:
I used to think I would be helpless if you left me
But still I carry on
I guess I must’ve had some deep reserves to draw on
Cause still I carry on


Nice work


Pat

Thanks for the detailed and thoughtful review. Much appreciated.

Peter

Last edited by PeterF; 02/01/21 09:44 AM.