Originally Posted By: Pat Marr
this is beautiful. I love what you've played over the chords, some of it is so unexpected as to really drop my jaw. The melody is like nothing else I've ever heard.

Your subdued guitar tone is a good match for the real tracks, which have a bit more sparkle, and the end result is very pleasing to the ear. My only complaint about this song is that it ends too soon! I want to hear a bridge! Maybe a modulation up a step, and some more stuff that amazes me!

It's like the ride in the amusement park that ends just as you learned how to hold on.

wonderful!


Hi Pat.
Thanks for the suggestion . Im so glad you took your time on my music.
I actually feels the same. My plan is to make an album with miniatures ,and this should be the first intro tune followed immediately by another of my tunes, but I might have taken "Tak" too much out of that path, so inspired by your suggestion, I think I´ll try to expand the ending..