Originally Posted By: MarioD
"its dystopian rock but don`t let it bring you down" well that got my attention. This is really good. I liked the chord progression and lyrics. The other parts are good but to nitpick I thought the guitar was a tad loud and the vocal a tad to quiet. Bring up that vocal, those lyrics are to good to be buried in the mix. Note that is just my opinion and others may or may not agree.


Thanks Mario-the vocal has been lifted above the guitar since your listen.Thanks for your positive comments!

Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
Very unsettling, which is good in this case. Otherworldly is another term that comes to mind. Damned good probably describes it best. Everyone meshes good, including BIAB. Good job to all involved.


I like that: "unsettling" and "otherworldly" fit very well I think, so I appreciate your receptive listen!

Originally Posted By: dcuny
While I can't say I enjoyed the song - it's a bit too much of a downer for that - it's well done, well played with the music a good match to the poetic language.

Like Mario, I also though the vocals are mixed a bit low to make out the words clearly, but that seems to be part of the effect.

Not a toe tapper, but it hits the mark. smile


David,
I`m listening mostly on headphones and (on the new mix) find the vocal/lyrics very clear now... be interesting to see if later listeners agree.
Thanks for taking the time to comment.I understand your take on the mood, though to me its a song of resistance to oppression; galvanising rather than depressing.

Robert