Hi Vic ...

I really, really like this. I particularly liked these lines:

They told of a romance, a weekend in Vegas,
a short honeymoon in a couple of pages.
Then the last one from Saigon said
"Honey. I won't be gone long".

I'm a disabled vet - Vietnam vet - so I can truly appreciate what you have written here.

Your vocal harmony is perfect in the few places you used it. Nice! A great story song that has a beginning, a middle and an end. And each part holds it own quite well.

The lyrical construction of your song made me think of two great country lyricists: Tom T. Hall and Kris Kristofferson. In my book, thtat's a pretty good place to be.

Ya did good! I enjoyed this a lot. One of my favorites from you. Take care ...

Alan

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