Deej,

An excellent write. Nice internal rhymes and a great job of "aiming at" your title/catch phrase. (I'll say it again - your solo writes are by far your best - they are always well focused). Nice melody, too.

Good vocal (although I think a whole step down would have allowed it to be more "comfortable").

The simple backing is nice. The violin still seems slightly harsh - brings it "out of the mix" just a little.

A good song.

fj