Excellent work all the way around! Some things I particularly liked: the arrangement kept the focus on the singer in the lyric. The lyric is expertly engineered… Does not ask additional, unnecessary melody notes to be inserted in order to form rhyming phrases. Production wise, it’s top-notch. The only suggestion I would have is perhaps a slight modulation in the last sequence, just to give it a little more dynamism. But I love it just as it is!


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic