I agree with others that the beginning really catches your attention and the chorus is strong. You really sing this well too. This would do commercially -- upbeat-- the first 30 seconds would grab the streaming listeners and keep them listening
Bob, thanks for all that. I’m pretty sure my music money making days are in the past, Tom
Tom,
Excellent in all regards. Cannot help but LOVE this right out of the gate.
A GREAT sound. Everything coming together perfectly.
A solid write. It "sticks with you" with one listen. Hallmark of quality.
Superb mix. Engaging vocal.
This one has it all. Loved it!
fj
floyd, I sure am glad you liked it,Tom