The track works well. I can relate to the constraints of trying to sing and not wake anyone up! sick

Your phrasing is good and musical.

I've never heard "life to shelve" - it's an interesting turn of phrase.

It's not really important, but I'll mention it anyway: There's an unexpected change in POV from the beginning, where the singer is speaking directly to the listener in the first person:

But I won't change just because
You want me to ...


and then sings this question to... who?

And yet I wonder whether it's enough
To meet a girl ...


Then again, breaking "rules" is pretty much what music is all about. After all, you aren't writing a term paper! whistle

Nice work - I enjoyed the song. smile


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?