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When Jesus Got a Hold on Me Still plugging away with the Fusion Project. Thanks for listening. (Starting to get the hang of the R-16 
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Flows like a gentle stream...
Nice!
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I was hoping you'd like it
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Hi Ed
Your vocals are hitting it for six (cricket parlance) . I think in the USA you say hitting it out of the park . I could not think of another way to compliment your excellent vox.
Ed wrote <"Starting to get the hang of the R-16">
Yep , sounding good.
Keep 'em coming Ed (btw do you do requests? Closer Walk with Thee )
cheers
Gary.
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I got up to 1:40 and figured it was an instrumental.  I enjoyed the listen - thanks for posting!
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Thanks, Gary. I have this one, that to my surprise out performed the rest on Drooble. It is instrumental & about time for it to get the vocal track. https://drooble.com/song/3029693Hey, David. it is: V1 Ch1 -- Instr. Piano V2 Ch2 -- Instr. G. V3 Ch3 -- Vocal If you were to rearrange, what would you? I confess, my arrangements today are based on what I feel are the best takes. Not a good system. Thanks for the comment.
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Warm and calming.
Much enjoyed.
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Hey, David. it is:
V1 Ch1 -- Instr. Piano
V2 Ch2 -- Instr. G.
V3 Ch3 -- Vocal
If you were to rearrange, what would you? Just because a song falls outside the norms doesn't mean it should be changed. Generally, there's nothing wrong with having a short vocal song. I'd have probably dropped the long instrumental, or put it at the end. But would it have been an improvement? I wouldn't say that. I didn't comment because I was complaining, just that I was surprised. Unless you've got someone who skips your version because they don't find vocals in the first half - and that's not likely a real problem - I see no reason to change it.
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Thanks, David. Good Advice.
Thank you for that, gruverider
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ed,
One of your best.
Good balance between vocal and tracks.
Well done.
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Well done Ed. Guitar sounds great. Well done
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Thanks Floyd. Thanks, Scott.
I'm finding a work flow -- do a public domain, do an original. Going with that.
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You nailed your genre.
Well done.
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Hey Ed...love the easy flow and feeling of the tune and really appreciate the message...great job...Dan
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Thanks for that, Captain Moto.
Thank you, Firesong.
You guys do nice work!
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Hi edshaw,
Nice very catchy composition. It is soft in the chosen arrangement. It's pleasant and well done.
Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash
Last edited by Derochette; 03/26/21 10:45 AM.
Kindly regards
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Thanks, Derochette. I enjoy sharing this space with you and so many other inspirational musicians.
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Ed,
It’s a pretty arrangement, and your vocal is really strong (though I’m wondering if it should sit back in the mix just a little bit—it’s a little too forward on a couple of notes). I think for me among the best I’ve heard from you.
I do think David has a point about the long “intro”—not sure the casual listener will stay with it (unless they are a fan of instrumentals). Mind you, it works as is. If I were to think about an alternative way to do it, I’d shorten the intro (maybe to 30 seconds or so) and then use the break after the first verse (at 2:32) to go into a longer instrumental, finishing up with that last verse and ending the song just how you do.
As David said, that’s not necessarily an improvement, just a different approach to cater to the dwindling attention span of many of today's listeners.
Good stuff, Ed!
All my best to you,
Deej
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Flows like a gentle stream...
Nice!
J&B Agreed!! Very comfortable and authentic sound!! Take care. Greg
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Thanks for the listen and comment, Deej56. Points well taken.
Thank you, Greg. There's this undiscovered treasure trove of
bluegrass gospel on YouTube that has been helpful.
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