Originally Posted By: mglinert
Mix / Production
Well balanced mix


Thanks!

Originally Posted By: mglinert
Instrumentation
The track suddenly sounds slightly empty in solo section at 1:58 – you may have taken too much out
Nice lead guitar sound - had me thinking of Gary Moore

By design. After building the track up until the chorus I wanted to drop things down again for the return to the guitar theme leading into the third verse. I listened again after reading your comment and still think it works, so we will need to agree to disagree on that wink

Originally Posted By: mglinert
Vocals
Not that keen on the unison lead, but maybe that’s just me. I prefer the alternate line verse.
I like the harmony sections though

Fair enough.

Originally Posted By: mglinert
What I really liked
Intro certainly grabs the attention – I like the repeat of the intro riff at the end. Nice touch.

Thanks!

Originally Posted By: mglinert
What could be improved
Solo at 2:44 sounds too long to me
I’m hearing a lot of ‘lonely’ in the lyric!

Well, the solo is the length of a verse, which to my mind isn't too self indulgent. Unless you don't like guitar solos of course wink And yes, it's a song about being 'lonely'.

Thanks for the listen and honest review, I appreciate it and respect your opinion.

Dave

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