Great job. I like the lyrics and the music fits like a glove.
Poignant topic as we are seeing an increase in the number of people who are living on the streets due to things beyond their control.

Good song


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.