Very impressive. I especially like the harmony vocals that are echoing the lead.

I could tell there was something synthetic with the voice but it didn't sound like a vocaloid I've heard before.

So is that synthV like a vocorder where you sing and it effects the voice? It was kind of difficult to understand the website on this phone.

So much to like about the song and it's evident the work you have put into it.

Your narritive on the writing was as much fun as listening to the song itself. I can relate to the inner turmoil and struggle with writing something that is coherent, interesting, and makes sense. Certainly not an easy thing to do. And like you said... I get inspiration from the strangest of places and situations.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.