Hi, Deej.
Strong start, excellent write. Well sung. The "screams" work nicely.
Love the harmony on the chorus - catchy and fun to listen to hear!
The last part of the solo is still...
off. Have you considered chopping those bars out of the song? There's no rule that a solo has to be a particular length. Or lie to it about the chords and see if you get something better.
I like this song a lot - catchy with a 60's throwback sound.
