Originally Posted By: rsdean
Robert,

I love the edge that this song has. Also, a great vocal by you propelled with a sense of urgency which is very effective here.

Excellent instrumentation and mix. Loved it all!

Bob



That`s very kind, Bob- thank you!

Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Hi Team,
Wild tune! Was listening and reading lyrics... Reading part is a bit faster, was wondering: how will Robert make this fit? Almost like puzzle solving, but in artistic and elegant way. Fantastic drive on Ray part, made a great backbone to the project. Scott, fun guitar. Song is slightly busy for my taste, but I have appreciation listening to uncommon and interesting tunes. Good addition to the SP collection. Thank you for sharing.

Misha.



Misha,
I appreciate your attention to the lyrics; a big subject in 3 verses!
Yes, Ray`s work really moves the song into another gear( my demo was quite folky, but like the rockier place we ended up)
Thanks for your support for SL!

Originally Posted By: Gary Weder
I like the lyrics which make you think. Everything works well ,the guitars and the vox .Nice.


Gary,
Thank you for listening and commenting!


Originally Posted By: PeterF
Spirit Level

Impressive.

A cohesive sound, Ray's guitars and bass push the song along and nicely compliment Scott's melodic guitar.

A very nice vocal and lyric by Robert tops of a really good piece.

Peter


Thanks for those positives, Peter!



Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
Reminded me (Bud) of a picture of me standing on the Haight Asbury corner in 1968 smile

I'm old enough to have completed undergrad school that year so this ain't my first rodeo when it comes to this genre smile ... you guys do this very well. Janice came into the genre via her older brother so she also has an appreciation.

At the moment Janice is making a windmill motion with her arms and saying how the entire song vibe gives her that feel.

The lyric, vocals and guitar really nailed the best of that era.

Nice!

J&B




J&B,
Though I never think these days of trying to write in tune with a genre, I confess that this one began while listening to an instrumental from my favourite SF band... so your being sent into that Haight Ashbury reverie makes sense.
Thanks for your interesting review!

Robert