I really like this David. It's so good.

J-Pop is getting pretty hip-hoppy these days, and here is an example.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Uhh62MUEic&list=PL85dWO4i_3jZ1KkehTGKgpuQb4wcEWnge&index=3

There are tons of loops and samples to mix with the kind of thing you are doing to add a little more bounce.

Again, I like this, so this is just an idea for future stuff. Add some loops!

Also, pop is slightly more repetitive and less wordy than this, and I will let you have these for free:

Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
It's you, it's you
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh
It's you, it's you
I do
I do
I do
I do
I do

That was on the house man.






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