Originally Posted By: Derochette
Hi Robertkc,

Very soft song from your lyrics as well as from your very soft musical accompaniment. The second voice is very well placed. The quarted strings works wonderfully.Well done.I appreciated.

Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash


Thanks, Derochette; I like the RT quartet strings; with a little thickening they do the job... now if only I had your MIDI skills.


Originally Posted By: Leon1
My heart was beguiled by this one. Beautiful work, Robert.
Regards,
Leon


Leon,
That`s very kind- thank you!

Originally Posted By: rayc
The arrangement holds your voice at its center really well.
Sensitive lyric, sensitive rendition, sensitive topic - all done really well.
There's a little proximity effect on the vocal in spots but that's to be expected for such an intimate vocal.


Ray,
I appreciate those comments; those more delicate vocal lines I had to sing close or risk fading away!

Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
A very bitter-sweet song. Lovely vocals. You found a beautiful melody. Nice music by the band. I like it.


Thank you for listening and liking.

Originally Posted By: dcuny
Starting with cello and piano hooks me in, and you're pleading lyrics match your voice. Nice harmonies! This shift to the minor chord works nicely, and the strings in the background is very cool. The voice and cello weave together, with the strings giving a lift.

Soft and sad. Nice write as well! laugh



David,
Its good to hear you approve of the arrangement and mix; thankyou!


Robert