Originally Posted By: TuneMonger
Good song sung well. Great work all the way around.


Thanks, Tunemonger!

Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Excellent choice of the cello, Ezekiel. That and the emotion in your vocal really tell the story the lyrics suggest. "Scattered fragments of love slowly disappear." Sadness is never so deep as when it can't be fixed.


Marty, Thanks. I appreciate the comment about expressing the emotion vocally!

Originally Posted By: PeterF
Scott

Really nice song - beautifully sung - wonderful harmonies and lovely instrumental parts.
(I'd be inclined to drop the volume of the guitar.)

Really excellent work.

Peter


Thanks, Peter. I will have to listen to the mix again and tweak the guitar.

Originally Posted By: Derochette
Hi Ezekiel's Storm,

Beautiful suite of chords on which the piano and the cello bring a plus. Your voice is pleasant and lends itself well to the melody. Well done.


Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash


Derochette, I appreciate the kind feedback.


Originally Posted By: jptjptjpt
I like the piano. Well written tune. Nice use of the band too. Great clear vocal recording. Good one.


Thanks so much, JPT!

Originally Posted By: floyd jane
EZ,

"Old photographs
Tell the stories we want to still be true
The images blur
‘Til I can’t see what was you"

Nice.

A good write.

(I think it's a good idea to switch to piano once in a while for writing...)

Good production. Really nice vocals and BGVs. Very good mix.

Sounds good.

fj


Thanks for the listen and comments, Floyd.

Originally Posted By: Janice & Bud
"It’s time to open our hearts
To what’s deep inside
We can’t hide anymore
From these unspoken lies

Old photographs
Tell the stories we want to still be true
The images blur
‘Til I can’t see what was you"

To present an oft told sad scenario in such a fresh and richly imaged write is no small
feat ... Well done! Most impressive.

And the emotive vocals, excellent band and fine mix nailed the feel. Sad but very engaging.

A really outstanding production.

J&B





Janice and Bud, thank you for the positive feedback!