Originally Posted By: MarioD
That was absolutely outstanding, loved it. The first thing to come to my mind was this is something that John Prine would sing!

I really like the backing tracks and especially the lyrics, very poetic. I loved how Janice change harmonies during the choruses, brilliant.

This should be on the radio.


Thank you Mario. I appreciate you mentioning the harmony!

Janice

Originally Posted By: vicarn
It is a lovely song.
I was reminded of "Old church hymns and nursery rhymes" flow wise.

Just one sugg to keep or sweep:
shorten the pause between the third and last line here and there.
Not sure if it'll add interest but may be worth a try.

Vic
Originally Posted By: David Snyder

Sounds great Steve!

Lovely breakdown arrangement, and gorgeous harmonies with Janice.

smile


Thanks y’all!

Janice


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