Hi Ian,

The mix sounded well balanced to me. I really like the minor/major mode thing that you had happening in this song. You've got a good sense of lyrics. I was carried through the lyrics by the images your words created in my mind. I also like how you have taken the metaphor of train lines and applied it to the concept of inner turmoil and chasing greener pastures that don't exist (at least, that's how I heard it!).

I thoroughly enjoyed the listen Thank you for giving me the opportunity.

All the best with the next one!
Noel


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