Hi,

I enjoyed your song - lots of humour and really different (that's good).

Song Start - needs a little bit chopped off the start (you've probably already done it).

Guitar - very tasty throughout the song.

Backing Instruments - all good.

Vocals - Nothing wrong with talking/singing but needs to be more upfront.

Mix - all good except vocals - it sounds as if you are standing 5 metres behind the band. Choose a short vocal reverb and also raise the volume of most of the vocals (the oohs in a couple of places are too loud) - especially when you are singing solo. You need to be slightly louder than the lead guitar.

I look forward to hearing any remixes you may do.

Best Regards
Nigel

Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com