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Originally Posted By: BlueAttitude
Hi Scott,

Nice writing, and your vocal is perfect I think.

Enjoyed the listen!


Thanks, Dave. I appreciate the comment about the vocal because I thought it was a bit shaky.

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Good vocal, good song. Is there really anything else that needs to be said? wink

I like it!


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Great lyric with a bit of "connect your own dots" regarding the relationship.

Wonderful imagery throughout and well carried by your vocal.

Janice says "warm" describes all the aspects!

The two RT's carried the tune well. The lyric and melody offered plenty of variety without the need of additional tracks.

Nice!!

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Originally Posted By: rsdean
Scott,

I absolutely love this song... My favorite from you.

Perfect arrangement and mix. An outstanding folky vocal.

Excellent!

Bob


Thanks a lot, Bob!

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Originally Posted By: justanoldmuso
great example of the kiss concept.
well done.
best
om


OM, yep, keeping it simple, just me and a guitar and bass. Thanks!

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Originally Posted By: BabuMusic
Yes, that's a good hook to write around. What a perfect acoustic track, and the bass simply holds the roots and allows your ever-so-excellent vocal to make it work. The melody is smooth and flowing. Just am excellent write and very well presented, Scott.


Thanks, Marty for your thoughtful comments.

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Originally Posted By: floyd jane
Scott,

A good write. Simple, yet complex. Good imagery.

The simple instrumentation works well. Good vocal, good mix.

Enjoyed the listen.

fj


Thanks, Floyd. I like simple, but I ain't no simpleton. (I think there's a song there.)

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Nicely easy-does-it. A lot of Cat Stevens feeling, to my ears. The lyric is amply mysterious and open, with a lot of contrasting visuals. She's not an easy one to figure out, is she? Very much enjoyed.


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Ezekiel,

Love listening to your tunes . . . they always have a great vive and this is no exception. Great choice on the simple production—I wish I could show that restraint sometimes. Rich and heartfelt vocal. Beautifully done!

All my best to you,

Deej

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Originally Posted By: dani48
Hi, Scott !

I like your tune very much
Superb indeed ! ....and I like
your voice !


Take Care !

Cheers
Dani


Thanks for your kindness, Dani!

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Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Scott, your vocal carries this nicely with the minimal backing! Great tune as is and would work with a full backing IMO! You write some pretty good stuff! Thanks, Torrey


Torrey, I appreciate your comments!

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Originally Posted By: Charlie Fogle
Simple works very well with this tune. Enjoyed your vocal performance. All the right choices were made in putting this top level production together.

Charlie
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By the way, can you post the correct acoustic guitar? Acoustic guitar (RT23909) doesn't work.

Thanks,

Charlie


Thanks, Charlie. The correct guitar RT is 2930.

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Originally Posted By: Sundance
Much enjoyed the live singer songwriter vibe you created. Great vocal.
Josie


Josie, thank you for the listen and comments!

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Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hi Scott,

I had the honor of having a pre-listen and I can only only repeat what I said then: Fantastic write (because I know a young lady tha tthis song could be about.)

I think that 'slim' arragement is fantastic, and you know how much I dig your voice and singing.

Very, very well-done.

And like I as said, 'Can't understand why you're still working in the 'ed-biz' when you could easily make the grade as singer in a Johhny Cash cover band ...

All the best, Scott,

Stefan


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Originally Posted By: Rustyspoon#
Scott,
Very good lyrics and performance! Perfect reminder that good songs do not have to be packed like sausage (my problem :))
Liked it! Thank you for sharing.
Misha.


Thanks, Misha. I like that: "packed like sausage." Ha ha!

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Originally Posted By: Robertkc
Scott,
Its no surprise your voice is strong enough to carry a stripped down production and hold the interest throughout.
Of course it helps that this is a strong write with interesting imagery and a good hook.
Proof that less is more; nicely done!

Robert


thanks so much, Robert!

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Hi Ezekiel,

This song has an understated elegance, emphasized by your vocals.
The lyrics are wonderful and your presentation is what I said about your song.
I wondered what made you write these lyrics. I think I don't know a person, like Stefan, so that explains my wondering.
And I was also thinking would it be nice with some other instrument, like strings or a cello? To answer this myself: yes it could, but in the way you brought it, it's not necessary at all.

I enjoyed listening,
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Originally Posted By: Crossroads
Hi Scott,

I had the honor of having a pre-listen and I can only only repeat what I said then: Fantastic write (because I know a young lady tha tthis song could be about.)

I think that 'slim' arragement is fantastic, and you know how much I dig your voice and singing.

Very, very well-done.

And like I as said, 'Can't understand why you're still working in the 'ed-biz' when you could easily make the grade as singer in a Johhny Cash cover band ...

All the best, Scott,

Stefan


Stefan, Mein Herr! You and I could tour as Johnny and Elvis. Hahahahahaaaaaa!


Nothing I'd rather do ;-)).

And I already thought of a name for that tour: "From Heartbreak Hotel to San Quentin"...

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I like this one a lot, Scott. Really well written and a lovely warm and resonant vocal. I can picture you doing it on stage with a trio of female backing vocalists.
Regards,
Leon

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Originally Posted By: dcuny
Good vocal, good song. Is there really anything else that needs to be said? wink

I like it!


Thanks a bunch, David!

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