Hi Dewey,

This is a pleasant song, sung by someone (you) with a very pleasant voice!
But all the time in my head I heard a background vocal singing along with that 'Jack me up'part.
And some heavier beat as well. But this is all only a matter of taste.
What stays is your pleasant vocals and tune.
Good job!

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130