Superb. You're on a roll. Carry on :-)

One can just visualise the scene you paint. Musical arrangement is spot-on. Your voice is darker in tone, somehow ... deeper, perhaps. Love its timbre. The song tells the story.

Please carry on, seriously. When you're in the zone, I've already said this, no-one's close. And here you're definitely in the zone. Simple song, you say? Perhaps. But brilliantly done. So carry on - you get even better with each song, if - as here - you stay true to yourself and write about what you want to write about (when don't you? haha!!!) :-)

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