I lost my 1st response..oh well...
The FX on the 1st verse vocal, actually all through, are triggered to excess by relatively minor essing & plosives.
You ought to address those sounds PRE FX if you know how.
Sonically there's plenty of Moody Blues style heaviosity.

The syllable gargling of "...the end..." and "...Abraham" sound really like obvious affectations in that early part of the song.

I think the song needs a gear change about 2/3rds the way through - key/tempo/dynamics - something. The "soaring" lead thing isn't a bad idea but the RealTrack doesn't really do it for me.

Lyrically, there's a little too much repetition and the Alpha Omega bit is open to diverse interpretation...I get the 1st and last but the idea of Alpha male also came forward pretty quickly.

Good work, solid arrangement, solid melody, HEAVYness abounds.


Cheers
rayc
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