Originally Posted By: justanoldmuso
kudos. very unique. loved that dowop bit.
well well done.
this song has lots of character.
regards.
om

Thanks, OM. That doowop part is me as a kid in the 50s coming through.
Originally Posted By: Derochette
Hi BabuMusic,

Superb melody. Very pleasant composition. All the ingredients are present. I looked on youtube and soundcloud where I put a like. well done.

Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash

Thanks for all your support, Derochette. I really like what you say about the melody because you are sooo good with creating melodies.

Originally Posted By: edshaw
You appear to be scoring at will these days, Marty.
(Did I hear you just squeeze four syllables out of "rhyme?"

Hahaha. Thanks, Ed. I went back and counted, and believer you're right.

Originally Posted By: rayc
Nice one Marty,
I watched the video and it sits pretty well with the song too.
It's nice to get a laugh out of the things you slave over.
Your voice n bass are in fine form...as usual.

Thanks, Ray. You know I have you to thank for many improvements.

Originally Posted By: Torrey Bliss
Great job Marty! Man can you play that bass!! Nice work on the vocals! If someone is creative they can take a word and bend it into something that works for a song like you described! You're a talented fellow! Take care, Torrey

Thanks for the high praise, Torrey.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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