mario.
i like where that elec gtr lead comes..
heres some lyrics ideas for vocs. that came off the cuff
from your jazz.

my babys coming over from ways away tonight.
i got that cool ness factor turned up really really high.
maybe we'll try this time and make each other try.

i cleaned everywhere all around.
and i gotta seem not too keen or too profound.
cos the one i want is coming over tonight.

just some daft ideas.
best
om

my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)