"i like it, but maybe others wont. which brings me to a point i would like to make.....
ive heard/met too many songwriters never finalising a song cos they are concerned bout criticism from the rest of the world. i personally dont think this is healthy. so what i do is work very hard on a song till i like it...then i hope other people do. if they dont i just take my lumps...lol."

I agree. However a number of listeners on this site have given me some very valuable suggestions. I have take a number of lumps on sites also.

OK the song. I tried to find something wrong with it but I had no success. Everything is perfect! Your vocal was very clever and very well done. Great groove and backing tracks.

Loved it.


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64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware