Hello Gary,

I like your song!
As Ghostgum said it painted a nice picture of you in the past and that town.
The song has a nice build up. at first I thought you missed a tough on the piano (where the verse ends and the chorus starts),
but you repeated that in the next verse/chorus, so it is part of the song. I listened again and it worked nice.
I also think your break close to the end part, is done very well. It makes the song more interesting.
The pianoplay is very enjoyable. Was it you? Or a RealTrack?

One minor thing was your pronouncation of some words, like Night and Fight in "On Saturday night oh boy did we fight".
You say something with 'ich' at the end of each word. It that the Barcy-accent?

But, as I said, I enjoyed it,
Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130