Gary,
Love the piano in the opening; captures the ear straightaway. The vocal seems perhaps a bit too forward; with a bit of static introduced in the recording each time the vocal kicks in. I might look to soften and sit them back just a tad. The song is solid otherwise—really nice write and the melody is engaging. Good tune!
Best regards to you,
Deej
Deej56
Thank you so much for your very constructive feedback. Once again I am benefitting from the fresh ears and expertise of one of the best vocalist on the showcase and beyond. I am making notes to help with the remix.
Once again Deej56 , thankyou for taking the time to listen and comment.