crikey...gday mate.
this is very different...in a good way.
v interesting song concept.
i hear background screams occasionally repeating the lyrics. and at song end maybe a scream..
eg 'BREAK THAT WINDOW ' at song end.
or 'I WANT TO BREAK THAT WINDOWE' kinda idea.
only thing i might suggest is dialing back a bit the vocal fx.
cool effort/song/inventive.
best
om

Last edited by justanoldmuso; 10/01/21 04:11 AM.

my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)