Hello justanoldmuso,

Interesting Song!
As Ezekiel's Storm says, I also enjoyed your song and the cultural lesson.
I can see you tried different things in this song.
And I can see that you couldn't do some of them well and used another method to produce music that was closer to your original purpose.
As others said, the sound was not punk in some places, but I enjoyed it enough.

Best regards.

Shigeki Adachi